Wow
a great peice of art trully! if u want this to be great, make it longer, add music or sound affects, but seriosly that was great, and the person above me, NG's is a place for everykind of art anything can be on here (as long as its good :P)
<3
Wow
a great peice of art trully! if u want this to be great, make it longer, add music or sound affects, but seriosly that was great, and the person above me, NG's is a place for everykind of art anything can be on here (as long as its good :P)
<3
Yeah, thanks.
Some day I'll try to make something with a script, sounds and longer...
But thanks for review.
=)
Nice
For once, someone actullay did a flash about a very serios problem everyone faces on the way home at 12 oclock on a friday night. I live in Huron County in Ontario and Underage drinking and driunking in general is an extream problem and this topic realy made me thing aboubt this kind of thing, keep up the good work man i liked it.
Wow....someone who actually appreciates it. Thanks, you've made my day!
By a) not critizing the phrases used.
b) not saying 'Use a storyline, like a guy driving home...blah, blah, blah'
c) getting the message whilst NOT living in the UK.
Umm...idk...
See this is my prob. its too fast... the writing oviasly goes by increadably fast, and the story dind't make alot of sence...But still good job... my advice is make it way longer, improve your writing, because i am guessing that your going for a big story here, so yeh.
Shut up shahriar lol... I can read the text fine, I don't see the problem.
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